These are some of the comments I got in reply to my fourth Concept Panel.

  • Use of web as a vehicle could go against Gruen’s argument. Consider reminding the user about this though their interaction with the web site.
  • Make work that explores Gruen’s ideas outside of the web medium.
  • How much will your work offer comment or critique of Gruen’s work?
  • Don’t simply dress his ideas.
  • “Cutting into text” Experiments presents a good vehicle for the project.
  • Interview is a very good foundation to the project.

(Thanks Chichi)

My thougts:

Web medium could in fact weaken the message. I will experiment outside web medium. I am not sure how to “offer comment or critique on Gruen’s work” graphically.